jueves, 24 de febrero de 2011

Paraphrasing

What is paraphrasing?

Paraphrasing is saying the author’s ideas in different words and phrases instead of quoting the author’s message exactly.


Exercise 1


1. Despite their massive size, elephants are known for being agile.

Elephants are fast, even though they are really heavy.

2. Because elephants consume up to 500 pounds of food a day, they are able to strip a forest bare in no time.

Elephants can eat a lot of food per day, so a forest can disappear if they are really hungry

3. Over the centuries, lions have been used in art to represent power and magnificence.

Power and magnificence is what lions have represented in art pieces , throughout years.

4. Lions are social animals with one dominant male in each pride.

Lions are animals that live in communities and they have just one leader.

5. George Washington Carver was a dedicated teacher, in addition, he was known as talented artist, musician, and researcher who made valuable contributions to his people and his country.

The person who carved George Washington was a really dedicated teacher and he contributed during his life to his people and his country.

6. Archibald McLeish, known for his poetry, was appointed head of the Library of Congress by President Roosevelt in 1939.

President Roosevelt designated Archibald McLeish who was known for his job in poetry, to be the head of the Library of Congress.


Exercise 2

1. There is plenty of water of water on the earth. In fact, there is enough water in this planet for everyone to have a huge lake. The trouble is that the water is not always found in the place where it’s needed. In addition, much of water is polluted or salty. Because of these problems. There are many people without sufficient water.

Main idea: the water on earth and its unequal distribution.

2. New oil supplies need to be found to replace those that have been used up. There is a constant search for new oil fields. Oil hunters sink their wells wherever there are signs of oil. Each of these drillings costs thousands and thousands of dollars, and often there is not enough oil to make it profitable. Nevertheless, the search for new oil never ends.

Main idea: the expensive search for oil supplies.

3. Quakers a religious group known as the Society of Friends, have always worked for human causes. Before the Civil War in the United States, they were against slavery and led the movement to help slaves escape from the southern part of the United States and seek for freedom in the northern part. Today, they fight hunger and disease around the worlds and still aid people fleeing tyranny and war. Their beliefs are based on the principles of pacifism and simple living.

Main idea: Quakers are known for their beliefs and work for human causes.


Exercise 3.

Students rights.

Thesis: Students are the ones that will spend part of their life at University and they ask to their leaders to let them participate in issues that affect their lives throughout the university lives

I Main Idea: students fight for their inclusion in university matters as faculty selection, curriculum planning and scheduling.

II Main Idea: the selection of the faculty members.

III Main idea: student’s interests in the material that should be used to study. They fight for the permission to participate in the curricula planning that should be implanted in the university.


2 comentarios:

  1. Good job! However, in the exercise of paraphrasing in the first one; I would say elephants are big, instead of fat because in the original sentence is written massive size. Also, in the exercise 5, I think it is contributed "with", instead of "to".

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  2. Dear Andrea,

    Carver is part of Washington's last name.
    In the sentence related to lions, the omition of just makes it shorter.

    Good.

    ResponderEliminar